Think about your life
Your very crazy
Your a moron
You need to quit
You need to fight
Do your work
Dont do work
Be positive
Be negative
Take a short walk
Take a long run
Talk to friends
Talk to myself
Ugh! Why stop? You can write so much more. You have a way of making your readers want more. I love your writing. You may not of said a lot but the amount you have written says a lot about you. You put so much emotion behind everything you write.
Great job josh. I agree with amber I think you could add more. Also you could add some punctuation for contrast and imagery. I like were you are going with this. Good choice of words. I think if you add more it will enhance it a lot.
Ugh! Why stop? You can write so much more. You have a way of making your readers want more. I love your writing. You may not of said a lot but the amount you have written says a lot about you. You put so much emotion behind everything you write.
ReplyDeleteGreat job josh. I agree with amber I think you could add more. Also you could add some punctuation for contrast and imagery. I like were you are going with this. Good choice of words. I think if you add more it will enhance it a lot.
ReplyDeleteThis seems good. The word choice you used it short yet powerful. I'm not sure I see a plot twist at the end though?
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